Jun 26 2011

Boiling Hot!!!

Written by StoryBird · Short URL: http://b4a.us/a/5187

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Boiling hot, boiling hot

I’m on a stove in a pot

They are getting me ready for the time of tea

My mom, my dad, and you and me

The fans do not help at all

And the sun will not heed my call

Of “Cool down, cool down! That’s a little too much!

I’m not accustomed to heat of such.”

Wishing for shade, a little rain

That wet thing of which I used to complain

The brother to the fluid with me in this pot

In which I am boiling, boiling hot!

 

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8 comments on Boiling Hot!!!

  1. Picture of Data

    Data writes:

    Storybird writes a lot of poetry (which I am not a big fan of most of it), but I actually LIKED this one. Nice poem. Perfectly describes the past little bit, too.

    Posted on June 27, 2011
  2. Picture of Storybird

    Storybird writes:

    Yes, Data is correct about the heat. And there have been other poems he has said were pretty good. I’m getting better, aren’t I Data?

    Posted on June 28, 2011
  3. Picture of Grandma A

    Grandma A writes:

    I really liked the poem [Storybird].  You have always had the gift of writing and Grandma hopes you continue to develop it .  One day I will look in a book store and see a best seller with a lovely picture of the author on the back of the book jacket.  I will smile and say…“this book is written by my beautiful granddaughter” Love you B&P

    Posted on June 30, 2011
  4. Picture of Crissa

    Crissa writes:

    As much as we liked our time in Chico, I wouldn’t want to stay much longer. You are right, Storybird, it was HOT! Good thing we had the pool for cooling off in.

    Posted on July 08, 2011
  5. Picture of Shelby

    Shelby writes:

    Nice poem Storybird I didn’t know you could write like that:)

    Posted on July 16, 2011
  6. Picture of Storybird

    Storybird writes:

    Thanks, Shelby. This is one of my better poems, I will admit, but some of my poems are equally as great.

    Posted on July 17, 2011
  7. Picture of Tanya

    Tanya writes:

    Dear Storybird,
    I teach English in Russia and today I’m planning to revise weather words.I was looking for a suitable pic to elicit “boiling hot’ phrase when I came across your poem which I loved immediately.If you don’t mind,I’d like to use it for a little filler activity as a lovely piece of authentic poetry.
    Thanks a whale
    Tanya

    Posted on October 10, 2011
  8. Picture of Storybird

    Storybird writes:

    Tanya,

    I’m glad you liked it. Sure, you can use it with your class.

    Storybird

    Posted on October 10, 2011

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